Opening Chapter critique
What is it?
An opening chapter critique is a comprehensive review of your first three chapters, up to a maximum of 10,000 words. As well as analysing the 'big picture' elements of your opening such as structure and pacing, I'll also look at your prose, making suggestions to tighten copy and make your descriptions sparkle, and track any grammatical changes.
Who's it for?
This option is fantastic if you're preparing to query your novel (the process of approaching agents for representation - the first step towards becoming traditionally published), as agents often request the first three chapters as a part of your query package. This option will help ensure your opening chapters are as polished as they can possibly be, whilst potentially highlighting any areas you might want to look at in the rest of your book.
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Alternatively, an opening chapter critique can be a really useful thing to do when you're starting out with a new idea, and want another set of eyes to go over your opening and help you solidify your hook.
What do I get?
You'll get personalised and in depth feedback that will help you confidently edit your opening chapters. An opening chapter critique includes:
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A report analysing both 'big picture' and copy elements of the first three chapters of your novel (up to 10,000 words). You'll be given a series of actionable suggestions to help strengthen these chapters.
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In line comments on your manuscripts
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Tracked changes for grammar, spelling and punctuation
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A follow up 30 minute Zoom call after you've received my report to go through the suggestions and give you the opportunity to ask any questions
How much is it?
A flat rate of £225
How do I get started?
Firstly, I'd love to hear more about your project, to make sure I'm the right editor for you. Simply get in touch on the button below and let me know more about what you're working on and the time frames you have in mind. If you decide to go ahead once we've chatted via email, I'll send through a contract and reserve your spot. You'll need to get your three chapters over to me by a pre-agreed deadline.
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An opening chapter critique takes up to two weeks. Once I've sent back the report and you've had time to digest the feedback, I'm available for chat via Zoom to go through any suggestions and answer any questions you might have.